Story-Telling Unit: Development Lab

PITCH DELIVERY

(Friday 30th September)

When pitching my film concept “A Dead End” to my peers on Friday 30th of September, one main piece of feedback I received was that perhaps having the character of an assassin was too simple – giving me an opportunity to develop and expand my plot.

As part of this development, I have been brainstorming some ideas which I can expand.

However, nothing is finalised as I am struggling to find a way to convey the reasons behind the man’s death without showing who he is or how he was killed. In other words, I want to start in the middle of the action with the character already dead / dying.